Intro Paragraph

          Slums are a really bad place to live in. A slum is a run-down kind of city that is overcrowded has people living in poverty. Slums are a negative affect in the world because they have poor housing, are really dirty, and  are full of diseases. One of the negative affects slums have in the worls is that they have poor housing.

Homework 10/19/2011

I. Introduction
   A. Slums are a really bad place to be living in
   B. Slums are a run-down kind of city of poverty
   C. Slums are a negative affect in the world because they have poor housing, are really dirty, and are full
        of diseases.
   D. One of the negative affects that slums have is poor housing

II. Defendable point #1
   A. Poor housing is one of the negative affects slums have in the world.
   B. Supporting Evidence
       i. Quote
       ii. Paraphrase
   C. Explanation
   D. Slums also are really dirty places

III. Defendable Point #2
   A. Another negative slums have are that they are really dirty
   B. Supporting Evidence
   C. Explanation
   D. In addition slums are also full of disease

IV. Defendable Point #3
   A. Lastly, slums are negative affects because they are full of diseases
   B. Supporting Evidence
   C. Explanation
   D. Transition to conclusion

V. Conclusion
   A. Hook
   B. Slums are a negative affect in the world because have poor housing, are really dirty
        and are full of diseases
   C. Summative Points
   D. Leave the reader with something to think about.

Thesis Statemnt

Slums are a negtive effect in the world they have poor housing, people are exposed to disease, and are very dirty