I. Introduction
A. Slums are a really bad place to be living in
B. Slums are a run-down kind of city of poverty
C. Slums are a negative affect in the world because they have poor housing, are really dirty, and are full
of diseases.
D. One of the negative affects that slums have is poor housing
II. Defendable point #1
A. Poor housing is one of the negative affects slums have in the world.
B. Supporting Evidence
i. Quote
ii. Paraphrase
C. Explanation
D. Slums also are really dirty places
III. Defendable Point #2
A. Another negative slums have are that they are really dirty
B. Supporting Evidence
C. Explanation
D. In addition slums are also full of disease
IV. Defendable Point #3
A. Lastly, slums are negative affects because they are full of diseases
B. Supporting Evidence
C. Explanation
D. Transition to conclusion
V. Conclusion
A. Hook
B. Slums are a negative affect in the world because have poor housing, are really dirty
and are full of diseases
C. Summative Points
D. Leave the reader with something to think about.
Hector, you needed to actually write the quotes, evidence, and transitions in your body paragraphs.
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